It explained about phone users in four countries in 2003
Based on the chart, we know there are four countries are: Thailand, Philipines, Mexico and Paraguay. It explained about phone users in four countries in 2003. There are two types of the users, mobiles and landlines. Mexico is the most countri to use the mobiles, follow the Thailand, Philipins and the last Paraguay.
Beside it the most country to use the phone users landlines is Mexico, Thailand, Philipines and Paraguay. We conclude: Mexico is the best country to using of mobile and landlines phone user in four countries 2003.
This conclusion is too easy to desrip of the all the world. I think, need a large of research up to date to know how are the user of phone expand in the world. The research can begin to determined of each countries by amount of the people or amount of nation in five benua Amerika, Asia, Eropa, Afrika, and Australia, and then devided it to the countries themselves, if we try to research , we need spent of the time, and spent of the money.
The result of the research important to make a efficient and effective more to marketing force.
there are four countries are: Thailand, Philipines, Mexico and Paraguay.
there are four countries which are: Thailand, Philipines, Mexico and Paraguay.
Mexico is the most countri to use the mobiles
Mexico is the country to use the mobiles most
can begin to determined
can begin to be determined
we need spent of the time
we need to spend time
make a efficient
make an efficient
Sentence: The result of the research important to make a efficient and effective more to marketing force.
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Sentence: Mexico is the most countri to use the mobiles, follow the Thailand, Philipins and the last Paraguay.
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Sentence: This conclusion is too easy to desrip of the all the world.
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Sentence: The research can begin to determined of each countries by amount of the people or amount of nation in five benua Amerika, Asia, Eropa, Afrika, and Australia, and then devided it to the countries themselves, if we try to research , we need spent of the time, and spent of the money.
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