The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph represents the consumption of fast food by Australian teenagers in the three different categories from 1975 to 2000.

Overall, it is clear that there was an upward trend in the consumption of hamburgers and pizza whereas the figure of fish and chips indicated a downward trend.

To begin with, fish and chips were the most popular fast food in Australia, being consumed approximately 100 times per year. The consumption of fish and chips was far higher than that of pizza and hamburgers which started at lower level with about 9 and 15 times, respectively. After a brief decline i...

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