The line graph below shows the time spent wit different media by children and teenagers per day. The table below shows the average time spent per day with major media by adults from 2010 to 2013. Summarise the information in both the graph and table by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the most time-consuming media activity for youths, while the table graph compares the approximate time spent using media per day by American adults, between 2010 and 2013.
Overall, while television viewing remains the dominant activity for youths, TV and video have transformed the way American adults spend their time.
Time spent watching television content by youths increases from average three hours and two minutes to five hours and 30 minutes per day for 8 to 12-year-old people, and then declining to average three hours per day for 18-year-old people. Also, the rise in media use of listening music/ audio occurs from an average 2:00 for eight to 12-year-old people, then up to 3:00 per day total for 14 to 18-year-old people. People aged 8 spend about one hour per day playing video games, up an average of under two hours for 12 to 18-year-old people. The last media through gaming and printing media-under 60 minutes-remains virtually unchanged.
The key finding from the table is that the amount of time using every type of TV and video, Internet, and Mobile by American adults increased significantly over the 3-year period. By contrast, Magazines, Newspapers, and Radio showed the reserve.
and then declining to average three hours per day for 18-year-old people.
and then declines to average three hours per day for 18-year-old people.
People aged 8 spend about one hour per day playing video games, up an average of under two hours for 12 to 18-year-old people.
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
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No. of Different Words: 114 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.775 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.951 4.6
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Number of Paragraphs: 4 4