the map shows stakeford

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the map shows stakeford

The picture shows the main changes which have taken place in Stokeford between 1930 and 2010, over a 70-year period. Overall, what stands out from the picture reveals that the most noticeable change is the replacement of framland with several major residential areas which have changed considerably with the houses. Stokeford became a much more modern city.

The majority of changing areas was houses from north to south and the development of construction was increased dramatically in 2005. The farmland has been replaced into the residential areas in the north. Moreover,framland has been demolished to construct several houses along the streets in the south.

A striking point is that the public facilities have been become reduced in 2005. A primary school has been extended into two blocks of school buildings and shops have been replaced by residence which has been expanded in the opposite road. At the center of Stokeford, a green area has been converted into dwellings. The next places, large houses have taken place retirement homes.

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large houses have taken place retirement homes.
large houses have been taken by retirement homes.
retirement homes have taken place large houses.

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