National Consumer Expenditure
The table compares and contrasts the consumer expenditure of distinct categories of items by five different nations in proportion in 2002.
Generally speaking, all five nations consume more in “Food/Drink/Tobacco” compared to “Clothing/Footwear” and “Leisure/Education”.
Looking first at “Food/Drink/Tobacco” and “Clothing/Footwear”, Turkey has the greatest share in the former category while Italy accounts for the largest proportion in the latter one, with Turkey displays 32.14% as opposed to 9% for Italy. Meanwhile, Ireland displays the second largest share of “Food/Drink/Tobacco”, which accounted for 28.91%. At the same time, the greatest variation can be seen in Turkey. Compared with “Clothing/Footwear”, that of the “Food/Drink/Tabacco” is approximately five folds larger. Moving on to "Leisure/Education", all five countries render the lowest proportion in “Leisure/Education”. The greatest share can be seen in Turkey, while the smallest proportion can be seen in Spain, with Turkey occupying 4.35% while Spain displays 1.98% respectively. It is notable that Italy and Sweden make up nearly equal share in "Leisure/Education", with the former nation accounted for 3.2% as opposed to 3.22% for the latter country.
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