People were arrested and not arrested

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People were arrested and not arrested

The pie charts provide information regarding the proportion of people (both men and women) who were arrested and not arrested at the end of 1994. Furthermore, the bar graph shows the percentage of 7 reasons of most recent arrest.

In general, for both gender, the number of not arrested citizen dominated that of who were arrested.

A more detailed look at the first pie chart reveals that there were 32% men who were arrested which overweight the proportion of women who experienced the same case (9%).

Then, most men and women were arrested due to public drinking (31% and 36% respectively). Drinking driving was the second major reason of male arrest (26%). The other reasons (breach of order, assault and theft) were took 16-18% part of men arrest cases. On the other hand, assault and other unidentified reason had become the second most common reasons which brought women to police station. Drink driving, breach of order and theft contributed from 12% to 14% of male arrests.

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