The table below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS General Test in 2010

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The table below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS General Test in 2010.

The table compares the average marks resulted from candidates from different countries who took the general IELTS module in the year 2010.

It is interesting to note that German candidates achieved the highest overall score on IELTS. Moreover, they scored the highest in all parts, with the exception of reading aspect.

On listening part, average German participants accomplished 6.8 band score, which is higher than those figures for French (6.3), Indonesian (6.3), and Malay (6.2). Furthermore, for writing and speaking sections, 6.6 and 6.9 are achieved by German students, which are superio...

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Average: 9 (3 votes)

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students from Germany was ranked first with 6.7 overall score,
students ... were ranked first with 6.7 overall score,

from candidates from different countries who took the general IELTS module in the year 2010.
better: from candidates who took the general IELTS module from different countries in the year 2010.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 175 200
No. of Characters: 872 1000
No. of Different Words: 96 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.637 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.983 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.469 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 65 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.785 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.45 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.74 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4