The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London Olympic 2012 Games.

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The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London Olympic 2012 Games.

The table illustrates How many medals are won by the bottom different countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games.

It is clear that,in each of the given countries,the number of gold and silver medals won by America is by far the highest,whereas the share of bronze medal won by Russia is much higher than others.

According to the table, the number of gold medals won by America is on the top of the list,at well, under a half. The figure for China is more than five times as popular than the figure for Australia. These is closely by, at 38 compared to Australia, at 7.

When it comes to silver medals, similarly, the figure for America headed the list, at well over a quarter. The figure for China is not quite as high as that of America, at just over a quarter,with the one in Hungary being nearly seven times lower than that of China, at just over one tenth. Finally, almost a third of bronze medals is won by Russia. Ranked in second place is America,at 29. The figure for Hungary is nowhere near as high as that of America, at well under one in ten.

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