The table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009

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The table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009

The table illustrates the shares of pupils who took part in four different secondary schools from 2000 to 2009.

Overall, it is clear that, the number of schoolchildren attending specialist schools, grammar schools and voluntary-controlled schools had decreased during the given period, while there was an upward trend for community schools.

In details, in 2000 the most preferable school was voluntary-controlled schools, making up 52% of the total. The shares for special schools and community schools were the same, each at 12%, whereas the corresponding figure for grammar schools ...

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Sentence: By contrast, there was a dramatical increase to 58 in the number of pupils participated in community schools at the end of the period.
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