The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate some modifications made in an island, before and after the construction of various tourist attractions.

Overall, it is clear from the maps that before any alterations were made, it was just a piece of barren land. However, afterwards with the inclusion of infrastructure and various tourist spots, the island has become fairly attractive for the visitors.

Before any modifications, the island was deprived of any buildings and was just a mere piece of land with few plantation, having an area of roughly around 250 meters. It was bounded by sea in its North and South, w...

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