The unemployment figures amongst women of different age of groups.

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The unemployment figures amongst women of different age of groups.

The line graph shows the percentage of unemployed women that happens in 8 age groups. It can be clearly seen that there are two groups experiencing most of unemployment at the ages of 15 and 45.

According to the graph, the groups of age 18, 20, and 25 show a significant fall of unemployment from 15%, 10% and 5% respectively. On the other hand, the trend of unemployment encounters a fluctuation, where it rises slightly at the age of 30 to 6% and goes down at 30-35 year-old women by 4%.

The peak reaches amongst 45 year-old women as much as 20%. However, the progression depicts a dramatic fall afterwards at 10% of the age 55. Between the ages of 15-65, the number of unemployed women remain stable at 10%.

To sum up, the employment of females mostly happen in two different groups of age, between 25-35 and 55-65. Nevertheless, the ages of 15 and 45 are in reverse.

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