You are going to help your friend's child to teach lessons. Write a letter to a teacher you know and borrow some books.1. Explain about the child in details.2. When and where to teach3. Mention about the books you want to borrow.

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You are going to help your friend's child to teach lessons. Write a letter to a teacher you know and borrow some books.
1. Explain about the child in details.
2. When and where to teach
3. Mention about the books you want to borrow.

Dear Sir

Hope you are doing well. All are fine from my side. I am writing this to let you know that i am teaching a child and to request you to share some of the books which helps him to improve in his studies.

Recently one of my friend is shifed in to my appartment and he is having a child who is studying seventh standard. He is doing pretty good in all the subjects expect mathematics. I have decided to help him to get decent grades in mathematics as well. I will be teaching him for two months starting from next month i.e., May and June. Every day i will be teaching him for two hours at my home.

I would request you to share the "Mathematics -II", "Improving Your analysis skills" and "Smooth guide to success in problem solving" books which you use to teach your students. I will return these books to you at the end of June. Please let me know the feasiblity to share the above books

Look forward to hear from you soon.

Yours Faithfully,
Prathap reddy.

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share some of the books which helps him to improve in his studies.
share some of the books which help him to improve in his studies.

Recently one of my friend is
Recently one of my friends is

Sentence: Recently one of my friend is shifed in to my appartment and he is having a child who is studying seventh standard.
Error: shifed Suggestion: shifted
Error: appartment Suggestion: apartment

Sentence: Please let me know the feasiblity to share the above books
Error: feasiblity Suggestion: feasibility

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