You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of
flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter
• explain where you live
• describe the problem
• give reasons why you do not want this development.
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction from the development of local airport. I am living on Mohali phase 8 near airport. Local citizens are want to rollback the decision of make airport bigger.
Actually, I live in very noisy and air polluted area disturbed by the domestic flights. People of this area are mostly suffered by terrible diseases like migraine, heart-problems etc. Furthermore, according to the survey report of local agencies, children are lose their concentration power to focus on their work. It is actually effect on their mental and psychological state. Moreover, the expansion of airport decision has taken by the authority of transport ministry should be dangerous for local people and barrier in their healthy life. It creates a tension for those people who will be going to house-less.
I will greatly appreciate to you if you will be pay your personal attention towards my problem. I hope you will actively involve to prevent the expansion of airport and increase the number of flights.
I will be waiting for your positive response.
Date 19/Dec/2015
Local citizens are want to rollback the decision of make airport bigger.
Local citizens want to rollback the decision of making airport bigger.
I live in very noisy and air polluted area
I live in a very noisy and air polluted area
children are lose their concentration power
children are losing their concentration power
It is actually effect on their mental and psychological state.
It is actually affecting on their mental and psychological state.
the expansion of airport decision has taken by the authority of transport ministry should be dangerous
the expansion of airport decision which has taken by the authority of transport ministry should be dangerous
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