You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house.
Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was inside it. Make some suggestions about how to get it back.
Dear Berardi,
I hope this letter find you well. Firstly, I would like to thank you for all the attention and support you gave me while I was in sydney. I am writing to you because I cannot find my coat, I have tried to search it everywhere in my home but I still not found it. So, now I realized that I left it in my bedroom at your home, when I was on holiday in Australia.
My hooded coat is blue, with 2 large pockets. It is very important for me, especially for what it contains. It have indeed, inside my right pocket, a small address book and a golden watch gifted me by my grandmother, so it have an sentimental value for me. Therefore, I wonder if you could send it to me as soon as possible. The air delivery is best way to send objects from Autralia to England, the price is also quite affordable. I will pay you all the expense please just let me know how much it is going to cost you.
Hoping to hear back from you soon,
Kapil
It have indeed,
It has indeed,
so it have an sentimental value for me
so it has an sentimental value for me
The air delivery is best way
The air delivery is the best way
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.698 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.888 4.6
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