You have moved recently into an apartment and found few things that were not working? Write a letter to landlord - what was not working - why this is a problem for you - what you went to them to do about it?

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You have moved recently into an apartment and found few things that were not working? Write a letter to landlord - what was not working - why this is a problem for you - what you went to them to do about it?

Dear Mr. Sam,

Hope you are doing well.I am one of your tenant, living in second floor of your apartment from last week. I am writing this letter to appraise you with some problems which I am facing at the moment in your apartment. Allow me to elaborate this matter.

First of all, I want to inform you that the taps in the washroom are leaking constantly. As a result, my old daughter has slipped twice times. Parents are in afraid to go washroom because fear of slippery. Inclusively, the air conditioner of the bedroom is not functional and the summer season has almost started. Therefore, in this hot and humid weather, it is very difficult to stay and sleep at night without air condition.

However, we are prepared to pay the rent of first month but please these problems will be rectified at the earliest possible otherwise we want to change my accommodation as per my convenience.

I am looking forward for a prompt action in this matter.

Yours Faithfully,
Inder

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Average: 3.3 (3 votes)

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I am one of your tenant,
I am one of your tenants,

living in second floor of your apartment
living in the second floor of your apartment

I am writing this letter to appraise you with some problems
I am writing this letter to inform you with some problems

Parents are in afraid to go washroom
Parents are afraid to go washroom

because fear of slippery
because of the fear of slippery

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 173 200
No. of Characters: 775 1000
No. of Different Words: 117 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.627 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.48 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.525 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 55 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.308 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.939 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.385 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.283 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.697 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.087 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4