You have recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what wa

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You have recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:

give details of what was wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take

You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir,

I have some official tasks in your city and I have checked in your hotel at today’s afternoon. I will stay in here next three days. But I fall in a trouble due to unexpected weather condition and room temperature is not compatible for me. Heating system for the cool weather inside the room is malfunctioning. So I expect some assistants from you.

I found a report from met office. After seeing this report, I think, it is really an unusual weather behavior that in late autumn temperature has been fallen to -2 degree centigrade and following some days it may be declined more. It is heart-breaking news for me.

Anyway, most of the coats I have carried in this trip are not so warm cloths. So I cannot manage my body temperature using these because of heater inside the room not working.

As far I know customer care is the first priority of your organization and it is distinctly noted inside the hotel logo. Therefore, I am requesting you that could you please kindly arrange me a temporary heater from your spare collections. Alternatively you can manage me a well-conditioned room. Your help will protect me from cold allergies

Thank you very much for your prompt action.

Yours faithfully,
Arif

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due to unexpected weather condition and room temperature is not compatible for me.
due to unexpected weather condition, and the room temperature is not compatible for me.

It is heart-breaking news
It is a heart-breaking news

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