You recently heard about an international company that you would like to work for. Write a job application letter and say:
- How did you hear about the company?
- What skills and qualifications do you have?
- Why do you want to work there?
Dear Sir/Madam,
Subject: Interested in post of Senior Software Engineer.
I am Devaraj working as a Software Engineer for a private company in Chennai. My friend referred about opening in your organization for the post for the post of Senior Software Engineer in dotnet technology. I have seven years of experience in dot net technology. I have experience in eCommerce project.
I have a pleasant personality and good communication skills. I am familiar with web services, software development, architecture, database queries. I have played role as team leader for a six month project. I am available to work weekends, holidays and overtime.
As you are Information Technology Giant in one of most reputed organization in INDIA. I like to offer my service to grow both companies as well as my skills.
If you find my skills and experience suitable, please contact me to schedule an interview. I am looking forward to discussing my credentials with you personally.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Devaraj T N
My friend referred about opening
My friend referred a job opening
one of most reputed organization
one of most reputed organizations
Sentence: My friend referred about opening in your organization for the post for the post of Senior Software Engineer in dotnet technology.
Error: dotnet Suggestion: ?
flaws:
More sentences varieties wanted. Look, a lot of sentences start with subject 'I'.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 15 10
No. of Words: 170 200
No. of Characters: 841 1000
No. of Different Words: 105 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.611 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.947 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.084 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 66 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.961 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.133 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.35 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.699 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.169 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4