The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The table chart compares the proportion of men and women who are engaged in regular physical excercises in Australia in 2010.
At first glance it is evident that, with the exception of the age groups 15 to 24 years, the majority of women was engaged in physical activity compared to men.
According to the graph, about 52.8% of male between 15 to 24 years did more excercises in 2010 than female, and this figures declined gradually to around 42.2% and to approximately 39.5% for the ages groups 25 to 34 and 35 to 44 respectively. After that, the figure increased marginally as men get older.
On the other hand, the most active female belonged to the group aged between 45 and 54 at around 53.3% of the female population, whereas young women were less active compared to men aged 15 to 24. The number of men and women was fairly similar for both sexes over 65 years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6050955414 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46143527997 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624203821656 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5017226299 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310006749956 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150641873736 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896335667005 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200661246305 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729652588712 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.