The bar chart compares the amount of oil produced by six countries through 20 - year period.

Essay topics:

The bar chart compares the amount of oil produced by six countries through 20 - year period.

Overall, it is clear that, except Qatar, the production of oil in other countries increased and Saudi Arabia was the coutries having the highest oil production capacity.
In 1990, Saudi Arabia produced the largest amount of oil, at 8.5 million of barrels per day, three time higher than Iran, which only produced 3 million barrels per day. Followed by Iran were the UAE, Iraq, Kuwait, which accounted for 2.5, 2 and 1.8 million of barrels per day, respectively. The lowest oil production was belong to Qatar, at only 0.5 million of barrels per day.
After 20 years, the oil production of 5 countries tended to increase. Saudi Arabia witnessed the biggest increase to 15 million of barriels per day. The oil made by Iran, Iraq and Kuwait all rose up by around 2 million of barrels per day through 20 years. The oil production in the UAE stayed at 2.5 million of barrels in 2000 but then also increased to nearly 4 million of barriels per day in 2000. The capacity to produce oil in Qatar rose unremarkably in 2005 and finally fell to approximately 0.5 million of barrels per day at the end of period.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...ectively. The lowest oil production was belong to Qatar, at only 0.5 million of barrel...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... 4 million of barriels per day in 2000. The capacity to produce oil in Qatar rose u...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62244897959 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50199836832 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515306122449 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1847113203 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143873248245 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079466780345 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594608845446 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107452766708 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287087573913 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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