The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

The chart represents how much pound sterling has spent on six consumer goods in the UK, France, Italy and Germany.
Overall, British people spent the most for all six consumer goods while German was spent the least. It is apparent that, most of countries spent on photographic film, toys and CDs except German who spent the most for tennis racquets.
Photographic film was the most popular consumer goods as British spent over 70, France of about 165, and Italy of around 155. German spent the least amount on this item of around 145. Similar trend was found for toys and CDs where Britain spent the most of close to 170 and just over 160 respectively, followed by France and Italy of which amount had consumed in between 150 and 160, and only 145 for German.
In contrast, the rest of consumer goods recorded the minimal amount from the four countries. All countries spent about 150 for perfumes, tennis racquets and personal stereos except the UK spent the most on perfume of 160.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...s spent the least. It is apparent that, most of countries spent on photographic film, toys and CD...
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Discourse Markers used:
['so', 'while', 'in contrast']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256544502618 0.268076937826 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.104712041885 0.116061578633 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0837696335079 0.0759168565197 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0471204188482 0.0366838410393 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00523560209424 0.0131127313244 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.17277486911 0.155750635184 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0314136125654 0.0379272487307 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.22861813187 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00523560209424 0.0210936926555 25% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0837696335079 0.0948980150116 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.020942408377 0.00967000014798 217% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 986.0 1161.00487805 85% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.9 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73255813953 5.90752243213 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.290697674419 0.337110787985 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.197674418605 0.247514529752 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.133720930233 0.171178102325 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0581395348837 0.112407865282 52% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22861813187 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.546246751206 100% => OK
Word variations: 46.3803579071 49.3433353143 94% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5 23.0094962315 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1841717308 42.9750493124 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.25 135.714022679 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 23.0094962315 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.689975730869 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 41.2674418605 47.7609492067 86% => OK
Elegance: 2.93333333333 2.94281807926 100% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415654508317 0.418131533498 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.182039218706 0.181151798455 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0449144115539 0.0850326197045 53% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.741902215432 0.706616315825 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151992825958 0.157042692854 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.258290100569 0.228904883108 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123898843046 0.108899403657 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.356446166404 0.367819155151 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0763474536271 0.0812612215331 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33571877808 0.316326947829 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106236522156 0.0921553760075 115% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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