The chart below shows the percentage of films produced by 5 differentcountries in 3 years.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the percentage of films produced by 5 different
countries in 3 years.

The bar chart compares 5 countries in terms of the percentages of films which they made from 2007 to 2009.
Overall, three of the countries witnessed an increase in the percentage of films which were produced, while two countries experienced a slight decline in their figures.
The percentage figures for films produced in countries B, D and E all rose slightly. Country B saw a significant rise from about 34% in 2007 to 50% in 2009. The increases were more modest - about 2% - in countries D and E, reaching 15% and 7% respectively in 2009.
In contrast, there was a slight decline in the figures for countries A and C.The percentages were highest in country A, but fell steadily from 80% in 2007 to 76% in 2009. In country C, the figures fluctuated. From 20% in 2007, the percentage increased slightly the following year, before falling to 19% in 2009.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ne in the figures for countries A and C.The percentages were highest in country A, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71333333333 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80049183205 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4645072384 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.375 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130122071109 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071618111174 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780081945599 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102524047991 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451083538659 0.0819641961636 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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