This chart shows the top eight destination for newlywed British couples in 2010. The results come from a survey of 5000 couples.

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This chart shows the top eight destination for newlywed British couples in 2010. The results come from a survey of 5000 couples.

The given chart shows the information about the number of honeymooners who chose a destination among the top eight honeymoon venues in British in 2010.
Overall, Thailand was the most popular destination for newlywed couples, while the bottom of the list was The lake district.
Thailand was the number-one destination, with 1410 couples choosing this, making it slight more popular than Bali, at 1335 couples. The third popular venue was Costa Rica, with 750 couples spending their honeymoon there, which was around one third higher than the number of newlywed couples coming The Greek Islands, at 432.
Paris was next at 209, while Spain was slightly less popular at 140 couples. And this was followed by The Lake district, at 124.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 616.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 121.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41687146389 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652892561983 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 171.0 283.868780488 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5023894249 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210216008861 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107003206874 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699861321076 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134414812332 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716344294169 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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