The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts compare the proportion of water used for various purposes in six regions of the world.

In general, it is evident that North American and European people use water primarily for industry while the rest of the world spends it for agriculture.

Looking at more details, Central Asia and Africa make the most of water for agriculture, with 88% and 84% respectively. However, these two regions see an opposite trend in using water for industry which only accounts for 5% (Central Asia) and 7% (Africa). On the other hand, a great amount of water mainly used for industry can be seen in North America and Europe, with 48% for the former and 53% for the latter.

Of all the six areas, South America is the only region that spends nearly a fifth of total water usage for domestication, followed by Europe (15%) and North America (13%). The minimum usage of water for domestication can be seen in South East Asia and Central Asia, with both only accounts for 7% of total water usage.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38567151373 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554285714286 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.4675835356 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227242820385 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132431097147 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659708030275 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173914876215 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660572004113 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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