The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.
The pie charts elucidate the different contributing factors to make people happy between two age groups, those who are under 30 and over 30. Overall, all age groups have chosen the most happiness factors are the achievement at work, while hobbies and other factors showed the similar percentages for contributing to happiness for both age groups. It is interesting to note that, under 30 years old people believe the physical appearances and travelling are leading to their happiness whereas the financial security and family are the important factors to be happiness for over 30 years old people.
The predominant factors for all aged groups for being happy are the achievement at work and which percentages would be 31% for under 30 age groups and 32% for over 30 age groups. This percentage is higher than that of hobbies and other factors, which factors have showed not much difference in both age groups; 22% for under 30 years old people and 24% for over 30 years old people, and 14% for under 30 years old people and 10% for over 30 years old people, respectively.
About a fifth of people under 30 years old chose the physical appearances as one of the contributing factors to happiness, whilst 15% of those people believe travelling is the one making them happy. Meanwhile, financial securities are leading to happiness which have answered by a quarter of over 30 years old people, compared to 14% of those chose as the family as the contributing to happiness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this chose' or 'those choses'?
Suggestion: this chose; those choses
...30 years old people, compared to 14% of those chose as the family as the contributing to ha...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'whereas', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263537906137 0.268076937826 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.140794223827 0.116061578633 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0938628158845 0.0759168565197 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0180505415162 0.0366838410393 49% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0108303249097 0.0131127313244 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.148014440433 0.155750635184 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0505415162455 0.0379272487307 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66319687171 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0324909747292 0.0210936926555 154% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0938628158845 0.0948980150116 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00361010830325 0.00437022459523 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.014440433213 0.00967000014798 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1469.0 1161.00487805 127% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.9 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85258964143 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73763899035 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326693227092 0.337110787985 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.250996015936 0.247514529752 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151394422311 0.171178102325 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123505976096 0.112407865282 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66319687171 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426294820717 0.546246751206 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.5045163952 49.3433353143 78% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 35.8571428571 23.0094962315 156% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8871730777 42.9750493124 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 209.857142857 135.714022679 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8571428571 23.0094962315 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.689975730869 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 60.9567444508 47.7609492067 128% => OK
Elegance: 2.72340425532 2.94281807926 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268061230421 0.418131533498 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.308728123839 0.181151798455 170% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0704207670528 0.0850326197045 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.779693487689 0.706616315825 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0750568265058 0.157042692854 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183239283181 0.228904883108 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785257083349 0.108899403657 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.396371819428 0.367819155151 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.163347237849 0.0812612215331 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216067347694 0.316326947829 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621977842289 0.0921553760075 67% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.16585365854 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.