The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided pie charts fractionalize the reason through which a person of any age stays happy. A glance at the charts reveals, there is no noticeable difference between the activities or things, except financial security and family, that makes a person aged above 30 more happier than the one below 30.
Digging into the details, A person under 30 is most happy when they have achieved something at their workplaces, and it is clear from the charts, the similar case is there for a person above 30. Looking at other reason, Turns out that performing or doing a hobby makes both the age groups happy. Where there are some other factors to be counted in, but a sharp change in reasons, except the ones above, are observed in the charts for both the age groups.
A person who is under 30 is more likely to be happy about their good looks and appearance, instead of that, as a person grows older, they are more pleased with their financial security. Being with one's family is also important to look upon here, as a person grows, it is found that this factor pitch in in making them happy. In contrast to that, traveling is more pleasing to a person below 30.
Overall, there are some factors that make all the age groups happy, but as the person grows older, priorities changes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...th their financial security. Being with ones family is also important to look upon h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...ows, it is found that this factor pitch in in making them happy. In contrast to that,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61135371179 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29338725524 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554585152838 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8332996633 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169443645544 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842246570014 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496684080817 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122231334518 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341118235183 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.