The comparison between marriage and divorce ratio in adults, between 1970 and 2000.

Essay topics:

The comparison between marriage and divorce ratio in adults, between 1970 and 2000.

The former bar chart depicts the ratio of marriages and divorces in America, over a time course of 30 years, since 1970, whereas the latter bar chart illustrates the marital status of American adults in the year 1970 and 2000.

Over the period as a whole, the numbers of divorces were significantly lower - actually less than half - than the marriage numbers, excepting in the year 1980, in the USA.

In detail, in the year 1970 and 1980, the number of marriages were absolutely same, which was 2.5 million but the divorce ratio, in the year 1980, was lead by approximately 0.50 million than as in the year 1970. In the next 2 decades, the number of marriages was gradually decreased - 0.50 million every decade - and ended at 2 million in the year 2011. The same decreasing trend was analysed in the case of diverse ratio, as well, but on the smaller scale. After elevated up to 1.5 million - the diverse ratio - it was dipped at 1 million, in the year 2000.

Analysing the marital status of America adults, albeit the number of married adults was abruptly higher than the widowed, divorced, or single adults, the ratio of married ones ,in the year 1970, was one 10th more than compared to 2000. Additionally, the adults - who never get married - were 20% and 15% in the year 2000 and 1970, respectively. Other statuses such as divorced and widowed - adults - were in the very small number compared to the aforementioned ratios.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...single adults, the ratio of married ones ,in the year 1970, was one 10th more than...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.205479452055 0.268076937826 77% => OK
Verbs: 0.0993150684932 0.116061578633 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0787671232877 0.0759168565197 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0479452054795 0.0366838410393 131% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00342465753425 0.0131127313244 26% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.140410958904 0.155750635184 90% => OK
Participles: 0.041095890411 0.0379272487307 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50909349113 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0102739726027 0.0210936926555 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.119863013699 0.0948980150116 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00684931506849 0.00967000014798 71% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1439.0 1161.00487805 124% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.9 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57751937984 5.90752243213 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73763899035 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.31007751938 0.337110787985 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217054263566 0.247514529752 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.127906976744 0.171178102325 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.062015503876 0.112407865282 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50909349113 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488372093023 0.546246751206 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.7457448098 49.3433353143 93% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.6666666667 23.0094962315 125% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2835256198 42.9750493124 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.888888889 135.714022679 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 23.0094962315 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.689975730869 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 50.3720930233 47.7609492067 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.56818181818 2.94281807926 87% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365042521658 0.418131533498 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.254053609845 0.181151798455 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0883465332169 0.0850326197045 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.794977183564 0.706616315825 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137607428542 0.157042692854 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222705885173 0.228904883108 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707706504153 0.108899403657 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.467301129681 0.367819155151 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0557769361056 0.0812612215331 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271637400031 0.316326947829 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655871637834 0.0921553760075 71% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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