The diagram below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Essay topics:

The diagram below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Two diagrams illustrate how equipment is used to product cement and process concrete-making from cement.
There are five main stages are shown in process making cement and concrete. They are product power from limestone and clay, mix power, passing them through rotating heater, grinder cement and mixer concrete.
Cement production include four steps. First, limestone and clay are crushed to power, then mix them. Next, taking power to pass through rotating heater to heat them. After heating, the power is ground and become cement. Cement can be packed to a lot bags and delivered to stores, on the other hand, it is enjoyed into next process to product concrete.
Concrete-making process contains only one stages. We can be seen that 15% cement, 10% water, 25% sand and 50% gravel are took into concrete mixer, and then, they will be mixed to form concrete.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04895104895 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4308521154 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65034965035 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9471243807 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290260692894 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13410556196 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146319058041 0.0843802449381 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231159666669 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169647056503 0.0819641961636 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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