The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

Given is a diagram illustrating comprehensive information about producing reliable weather information at the Australian Bureau of Meteorology. From the information supplied, it can be easy to see that process comprises four primary stages of forecasting weather, and those are a collection of information, analysing data, preparing a report for broadcast on the computer and finally broadcasting with media.
The process commences when information gathered from different sources, such as satellite, radar station and drifting buoys on the sea. During the second stage, collected data are analysed and forecasted for further steps. In this case, a different type of visual representations, such as satellite photographs, radar screen images and synoptic charts are used. After that, analysed information preparing on the computer for the broadcast process. The process ends with the transmission of the final report to the public via various media, for instance on the television, radio and recorded telephone announcement.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, so, for instance, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81456953642 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20986484363 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668874172185 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8511140334 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.428571429 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154234668516 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768530859689 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111642468486 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144057086682 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101674012991 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 61.2550243902 54% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.06136585366 127% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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