The diagram depicts the cycle of life of Salmon which is a large fish species. It is worth noting that this fish has undergone several period in total over 9 years. Furthermore, in the first two stages, the fish species inhabit in freshwater while they live in the salty water in adult stage.
To specify, firstly, salmon eggs is laid in reeds and mixed with small stones to avoid predators in upper river. After about 6 months, salmon egg becomes fry with 3 to 8 centimeters long, and they move to lower river where the flow is faster. This process takes 4 years before fry grows and reaches the length of approximately 14 centimeters, additionally, in this stage, they are called smolt. Smolt migrates to the open sea and become adult salmon which can be 76 centimeter in length. This adult salmon has lived in the sea for 5 years before the reproduction begins again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e fish species. It is worth noting that this fish has undergone several period in to...
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Line 2, column 466, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'centimeter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centimeters'.
Suggestion: centimeters
...and become adult salmon which can be 76 centimeter in length. This adult salmon has lived ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62580645161 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46363774247 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3708329771 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.625 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149995696701 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072705423484 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865664276381 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132046629816 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641625783015 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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