Eating sweet foods produces acid the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)

Essay topics:

Eating sweet foods produces acid the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)

The provided line graph shows how consuming sweet products can cause caries in the mouth by increasing acidity level in it.

Honey is considered to be the least harmful among the others: cane and fruit sugar; It deteriorates the normal level of acid in the mouth from 7 pH to 4.8 pH within 5 minutes after consumption. Then, the figure remains the same for another 5 minutes increasing tooth cavity occurrence; only after approximately 13 minutes just after the consumption acidity level in mouth recovers to its safe level at 5.5 pH, which fails to cause tooth decay.

In contrast, both fruit and cane sugar is the most harmful sweet products to trigger tooth cavity due to the fact that it takes relatively longer time to hit the safe line after the consumption (20 minutes for fruit sugar and nearly half an hour for cane sugar, respectively).

Thus, the infographic indicates that consuming sweet products is likely to cause tooth caries since the products decrease acidity level in the mouth significantly.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'then', 'thus', 'in contrast']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.29347826087 0.268076937826 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.108695652174 0.116061578633 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103260869565 0.0759168565197 136% => OK
Adverbs: 0.054347826087 0.0366838410393 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0217391304348 0.0131127313244 166% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119565217391 0.155750635184 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0217391304348 0.0379272487307 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62440598239 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0434782608696 0.0210936926555 206% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.108695652174 0.0948980150116 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0054347826087 0.00437022459523 124% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0108695652174 0.00967000014798 112% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1020.0 1161.00487805 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.9 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93023255814 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.290697674419 0.337110787985 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21511627907 0.247514529752 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139534883721 0.171178102325 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0988372093023 0.112407865282 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62440598239 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563953488372 0.546246751206 103% => OK
Word variations: 48.7880343625 49.3433353143 99% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 8.93414634146 56% => OK
Sentence length: 34.4 23.0094962315 150% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7149890066 42.9750493124 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 204.0 135.714022679 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4 23.0094962315 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.689975730869 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 55.911627907 47.7609492067 117% => OK
Elegance: 2.35294117647 2.94281807926 80% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21839882552 0.418131533498 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.253140167629 0.181151798455 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0469253498277 0.0850326197045 55% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.926797233388 0.706616315825 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.090168320742 0.157042692854 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148373446249 0.228904883108 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036220164069 0.108899403657 33% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.348116658763 0.367819155151 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0834601803096 0.0812612215331 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153223229172 0.316326947829 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476875415755 0.0921553760075 52% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 7.1512195122 56% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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