The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA
between 1920 and 2000
he line graph compares birth rates in China and the US and how these rates
changed from 1920 to 2000
Overall, the birth rates of both nations decreased over the period of 80 years.
Although the two trends were similar in terms of a general decline, the birth rate of
the USA in most years was higher than that of China.
Written by Ngoc Bach
Website: www.ngocbach.com
In the 1920-1935 period, the birth rate in America fluctuated, although it always
remained above 10%. However, in the following decade, the American birth rate
fell sharply to below 5%. In the 1950s, the figure for the USA increased
significantly to exactly 15%, which was its highest point during the 80 -year period.
Throughout the remainder of the period, there was a gradual decline in the US birth
rate, which fell to 7% by the year 2000.(*)
Over the same period, the birth rate in China varied more significantly than in the
US. It dropped to 5% from 1940 to 1945 before reaching the highest point of the
whole line graph, 20%, in 1950. By contrast, 5 years later, the birth rate in China
decreased rapidly by over 10%, falling to approximately 2% in 2000
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73762376238 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47085253382 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559405940594 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
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Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
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Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
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Chars per sentence: 119.625 112.824112599 106% => OK
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Paragraphs: 17.0 3.83414634146 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 52.0 1.69756097561 3063% => Less language errors wanted.
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Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402486027179 0.215688989381 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172481851383 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131775832901 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121328724821 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108542176862 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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