The graph below describes rainfall statistics for Somecountry

Essay topics:

The graph below describes rainfall statistics for Somecountry.

The given graph illustrates the approximate rain precipitation in Somecountry throughout twelve months of 2004. Units are measured in millimetres.

Overall, less drops of rain fell in the first half of the year, while in the second half the rates climbed to the two highest point.

In terms of the time span from January to June, in the first month there was exactly fifty millimetres of rainfall and in the following month a slight decreased occured (just below 40 mm). During the spring months, there was a gradual increase to in May (just under 50 mm) which remained stable until the end of June.

On the other hand, during summer period of July and August, there were the second highest trends regarding rainy days (it plateauted at approximately 60 mm) while in September there was a moderate dip back to approximately 50 mm. As regards the peak, it appeared at the turn of October at just over 60 mm. In the last two months of the period the millimetres substantionally dropped to exactly 50 mm (the same trend as it was in January).

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Average: 5.1 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun drops is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...re measured in millimetres. Overall, less drops of rain fell in the first half of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, second, so, while, as regards, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68852459016 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70900502631 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0377941661 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 5.23603664747 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0425802648508 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0184133403194 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324920362854 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0283989661363 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284675920407 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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