The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the amount of energy consumed in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
Overall, the consumption of fossil fuels as Petrol and Oil, Natural Gas outweighed that of renewable sources as Nuclear, Solar/Wind and Hydropower.
To begin with, Petrol and Oil was and will be by far the most consumed. Prior to slight fluctuations over 10 years, its consumption stood at around 35 q.u in 1980. Since then, the amount of petrol and oil has gone up considerably and is predicted to keep its trend until 2030, hitting roughly 50 q.u.
Coal and natural gas have been almost the same in consumption until 2015. However, it is predicted that the consumption of natural gas will level off from 2015 to 2030, while there will be a gradual increase in the amount of consumed coal from 25 q.u to over 30 q.u.
Turning to the remaining resources, the consumptions of Nuclear and Solar/Wind have been and will be constantly on the growth, but their changes are negligible/trivial through the years. Meanwhile, there has been slightly ups and downs in consumption of Hydropower until 2010, but it is expected to remain stable until 2030.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, then, while, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8730964467 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80633084259 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578680203046 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.9822974432 43.030603864 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.142857143 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175180022651 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959628890106 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885447396814 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115550455467 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962503521429 0.0819641961636 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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