The graph below gives information on wages of some country over a ten year period

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The graph below gives information on wages of some country over a ten year period.

The graph describes growth percentage of wages in some country in ten years. It can be clearly seen that there was a decline in general.

It started with 2% increase in wages at 1993. In 1994, growth rate climbed rapidly reaching twice rate of 1993. But in the next year, there was a decrease in salary to 3% that stayed at the same level in 1996. Growth rate in salary went up gradually during the next two years in which it reached the peak point of 6% and it was preceded by a dramatic fall until reaching 3%. Percent increase in wages stayed constant in the next period. There was a sudden dip between 2000 and 2002 in which growth rate reached its bottom, 1%. Finally, percentage of salary rise grew and reached its starting point of 2%.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 610.0 965.302439024 63% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42028985507 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16427816581 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 173.7 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8028152962 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7777777778 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139685907707 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689430867534 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104013527915 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15191338178 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836760612979 0.0819641961636 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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