The bar chart illustrates the average monthly use of a health club by all full-time members while the pie charts displays its male and female membership owners divided by age groups in Miami over last year. Overall, the usage of health club by both sexes saw a steady rise at the start of the period then this trend reversed as it came to the end of summer. Additionally, 21-45 year olds made up the majority of the total member.
As seen in from the bar chart, female members’ club usage was recorded at exactly 500 people at the start of the year while this figure for male members was slightly higher, which was approximately 560 people. Subsequently, the number of females who used the health club continued to increase then peaked at around 720 people in September, whereas the number of males experienced a similar movement then it peaked and stabilized at about 840 people 2 months earlier. In contrast, both sexes underwent a decline and ended up with around 510 for females and 610 for males.
According to the pie charts, 65+ years olds had a contribution of 32% and 25% for female and male memberships all respectively. However, younger males (55%) participated more than younger females (51%). A similar pattern can be seen for others, 20% for males and 17% for females.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, then, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76785714286 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61591905943 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5440667899 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297148536664 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120800847003 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142756364127 0.0843802449381 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21182778685 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122385139594 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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