The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer.The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer.

The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

The graph depicts the requirement of electricity in England during winters and summers while the pie chart delineates the consumption of electricity in English homes. The spectacular feature of the chart is a paramount utilization of heaters during night hours of winters.

At a fleeting glance, it is clearly observed that 35000 units were used in winters at 12 am and then it gradually soared by 5000 in the following 3 hours. However, it was supremely used in between 6 pm to 11 pm. Moreover, the usage was almost half in summers as contrasted to winters. the demand was low at 9 am and highest in the afternoon hours as well as in 10 pm - 12 am.

It is interesting to note that more than half of the proportion was utilized by the several heaters whereas only 17.5% dissipated by the other kitchen's electronic appliances. The remaining was expanded by the Audio-visual aids and the other gadgets.

Overall, the desire of electricity was almost twice in the winters as compared to the summers.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80924855491 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87441366726 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57225433526 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5026401064 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4444444444 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188523810953 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770272988906 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111888275469 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122216543244 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121080295959 0.0819641961636 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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