The graphs below show the percentage of household energy used and the amount of greenhouse gases produced in Australia. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.

The first pie chart illustrates the proportion of energy use while the second one shows the percentage of emission of greenhouse gas in Australia household. Overall, water heating occupy the most of proportions of total while cooling and lighting is the fewest in both figures.

In more details, Australian use the most energy for heating and water heating with summation of both use just under third quarter. In terms of use energy for other appliances account for 15% of total. Refrigeration follow closely with only 7%. In contrast, cooling and lighting only make up a mere 2% and 4% respectively. 

Similarly, a third of greenhouse gas is emitted by water heating. Other appliances come next with 28%. Heating and refrigeration emit greenhouse gas at 15% and 14%. Finally, just under 10% of. total greenhouse gas released by cooing and lighting. 

In conclusion, it is clearly to note that water heating consume most of energy and emit the most greenhouse gas in six households in Australia.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the proportions') or simply say ''most proportions''.
Suggestion: most of the proportions; most proportions
...hold. Overall, water heating occupy the most of proportions of total while cooling and lighting is ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y make up a mere 2% and 4% respectively.  Similarly, a third of greenhouse gas is ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...use gas released by cooing and lighting.  In conclusion, it is clearly to note tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, similarly, third, while, in conclusion, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11515151515 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89078838449 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539393939394 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.9270585926 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172072085015 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649836013625 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756112791917 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11414078594 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408796090764 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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