The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
The provided illustrations compare an overview of the expenditure for three types of music albums in Britain, taking into account gender and age of people.Overall,it is obvious from the charts that percentage of people who buy pop and rock music albums look approximately similar in contrast with classical music album sales.
As the charts depict,men and women spend their cash more on Pop Music and Rock Music albums of the order of 26-25 percent and 15-17 percent ,respectively ,than on classical music albums which are not purchased more than 10 percent both for males and females.According to age 25-34 years old people prefer Rock and pop music collections slightly more than 16-24 years old ones.Whereas,this index shows a huge difference for classical music albums,only 1 percent for 16-24 years old and more than enough for 25-24 years old about 16 percent.In addition there are substantial contradistinction between 35-44 and over 45 years old people, there is a huge decline in the sale of classic albums for people aged 35-44 years, while for people over 40 years this type of music albums were sold on a large scale.On the contrary percentage of people 35-44 years who buy rock and pop albums about 30 percent,and over 40 this sum does not reach even 10 percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00469483568 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90778277863 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539906103286 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 106.0 22.4926829268 471% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 313.0 43.030603864 727% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 533.0 112.824112599 472% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 106.5 22.9334400587 464% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.5 5.23603664747 678% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252145959042 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226019894053 0.103423049105 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365339191014 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226019894053 0.15604864568 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365339191014 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 55.4 13.2329268293 419% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -27.65 61.2550243902 -45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 43.5 10.3012195122 422% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.93 8.06136585366 148% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 44.4 10.9970731707 404% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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