The line graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over last year.
The line graph compares the earning of four cafes in New York City last year.
It is clearly from the line graphs that the figure for the income of the Internet, Wi-Fi Café and Café cool increased gradually while there was a significant decrease in the tea room whithin the previous year in New York.
In January, the tea room had a highest income with 160000 dollar and the internet express was the second highest earning at 100000 dollar while the Wi-Fi café and café cool had the approximately same level at 50000 dollar and 30000 dollar respectively. On March, the amount of income in the tea room reached the peak at around 180000 dollar whereas there figures fluctuated at the beginning of the last year.
From September to December, the figure for the tea room decreased suddenly to 50000 dollar while the amount of Wi-Fi café increased sharply at 18000 dollar which the highest figure in December. Besides, the café cool and internet express both rose significantly to 120000 dollar and 100000 dollar in the December respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... York. In January, the tea room had a highest income with 160000 dollar and t...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...a room had a highest income with 160000 dollar and the internet express was the second...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...as the second highest earning at 100000 dollar while the Wi-Fi café and café cool had ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...d the approximately same level at 50000 dollar and 30000 dollar respectively. On March...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...ly same level at 50000 dollar and 30000 dollar respectively. On March, the amount of i...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
... room reached the peak at around 180000 dollar whereas there figures fluctuated at the...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...he tea room decreased suddenly to 50000 dollar while the amount of Wi-Fi café increase...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...f Wi-Fi café increased sharply at 18000 dollar which the highest figure in December. B...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 273, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...press both rose significantly to 120000 dollar and 100000 dollar in the December respe...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 291, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...gnificantly to 120000 dollar and 100000 dollar in the December respectively.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93258426966 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42436398145 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477528089888 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6534075926 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.333333333 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18961865464 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154054331858 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202896467879 0.0843802449381 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214157646265 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.221942381198 0.0819641961636 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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