many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. do you agree or disagree? Why?

Essay topics:

many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. do you agree or disagree? Why?

Nowadays, people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus and I agree with them. I think dolphins are very beautiful and friendly so I’m very love them. I hate seeing people train them like a robot and imprison them in circus. First of all, dolphins feeling will get hurt. They cant’t feel free. If I were them, I would kill myself because I couldn’t swim freely, couldn’t talk to my friends out there. It is really hurt. Secondly, THEY ARE NOT ROBOT. YOU CAN NOT TRAIN THEM LIKE A ROBOT. They can think like people, they have feeling. If they don’t want to do something, do not get them do that. They will against the trainer and they will hurt them until dolphins do exactly what they say. It is really bad. Thirdly, dolphins can have serious injury when performing the show. If you search “ dolphins accident “, there are a lot of results. It proves that dolphins will have serious injury when performing the show. This is my opinion about training dolphins in circus.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, i think, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 5.60731707317 606% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74719101124 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4062067304 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556179775281 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 1.53170731707 849% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7634595932 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.7058823529 112.824112599 44% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.4705882353 22.9334400587 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220356623986 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786575646563 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894304246774 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220356623986 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.2329268293 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.79 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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