The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

Essay topics:

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

The maps show the developments that occurred at the seaside resort of Templeton during a 15-year period from 1990 to 2005.
It is clear that the biggest change that happened was the resort has become a much more industrial area with modern infrastructure.
In 1990, the resort was much greener with a large number of trees. However, almost all of the trees and the small building was located next to the lake were replaced by two skyscrapers. Likewise, there were many residential houses in the southeast area of the Templeton, but those houses were demolished in 2005 to make way for skyscrapers. There was also a construction of a new big supermarket close to the skyscrapers.
In addition, an airport was built in the north. All the trees and houses near the coastline disappeared and were replaced by a large factory, while the railway was lengthened and it was located along the coastline. A new ferry was constructed in the southeast area of the resort. Meanwhile, the school and the hospital still remained until 2005.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... 1990, the resort was much greener with a large number of trees. However, almost all of the trees...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... large number of trees. However, almost all of the trees and the small building was locate...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, likewise, so, still, then, while, in addition, sort of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81306572542 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565714285714 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8874667032 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174977991938 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732032316358 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109438134621 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143520533742 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13976049874 0.0819641961636 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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