Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples….
A new born is flawless and learns all things from its surrounding. Of all the teachers, parents are the most important one as it is they whose actions and behavior is reflected upon the child. I am of the opinion that parents should be legally accountable for their child’s action and behavior. In this essay, we will analyze how a parent’s action effects the child’s behavior and action.
Firstly, parents are the primary person to which a child looks upon and it is their behavior that a child infuses. For example, my parents always despised a certain section of society and I grew up to follow the same. This clearly implies how a parent’s behavior reflects upon the child. Thus concluding that parents should be legally responsible for their child’s behavior and thinking.
Second reason is that parent’s actions are inculcated into child. For example, my father is a businessman and it was his rule that never cheat on customers, when I opened my business, automatically I included it as a rule of thumb. This example clearly projects how a child’s action was based on parent’s action. Hence, it can be concluded that parents are responsible for their child’s act.
Therefore, conclusion can be drawn that parent’s action and behavior contribute to child’s development. Parents are legally responsible as it is they who shape their child’s future. It is recommended that parents should always exemplify themselves as a perfect citizen so that their child grow up to be one.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, so, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 5.60731707317 678% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22891566265 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1146591459 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481927710843 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9235274835 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.8 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296351781148 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143296871973 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10986232166 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222924482128 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289245093623 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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