The percentage of school aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The percentage of school aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the proportion of schoolboys in two different age groups who participated in playing 5 sorts of sports in the UK in 2010.

Overall, the percentage of schoolboys who are between 6 to 11 years old were higher than the figure for boys aged 12 to 16 (except for swimming). In addition, football was the most popular sport preferred by boys in both age groups.

The proportion of 6- to 11-year-old boys in the UK played soccer was the highest, at 87%, while the figure for the older boys was lower, at 78%. Basketball was much more preferred by the younger group than the older group. The figures were 35% and 25% respectively. Likewise, cricket also attracts younger age group than older ones. The figure for younger boys was 35% whereas the proportion for older boys accounted for 25%.

23% of boys aged from 6 to 11 years old participated rugby, compared to only 21% of 12- to 16-year-old ones. However, the proportion of both age group in the UK who preferred swimming was the lowest and the same, at 19%.

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Average: 3.1 (3 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, so, whereas, while, except for, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65027322404 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6306694264 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502732240437 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3370664576 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240452097056 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112520450392 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977055852308 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199957341677 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106816277927 0.0819641961636 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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