Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
In the recent era, space exploration is one of the necessary sought of scientific experiment. Exploration of outer space will take huge money and resource, which is criticism by many people. Exploration will be benefited and it expands human knowledge and it will benefit humanity in the future. Many people think that it is a waste of fund and resources it should be invested on solving immediate problems on earth. In this essay, discuss the advantages of exploring outer space and lead to a new discoveries.
Firstly, space exploration will help to expand human knowledge and make a discovery to avoid population like discover a new living space like earth in outer space have surrounding to live like water, food, rain tress. Thus, it will help to send many people there to reduce the population on earth. Therefore, it exemplifies that exploring outer space will help the humanity.
The second reason is exploration of outer space will help to discover natural resources which are nearly comes to end because increase in population. Thus, it will benefit humanity to use resources because of increase in population. Therefore, it exemplifies that exploration outer space will benefits humanity in future.
In conclusion, considering all the points exploration will benefit humanity in future by exploring outer space a place like earth to live because population are increasing and it will discover natural resources to use for all the population. Therefore, it will benefited humanity in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'discovery'?
Suggestion: discovery
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...tion outer space will benefits humanity in future. In conclusion, considering all the p...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'points'' or 'point's'?
Suggestion: points'; point's
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
... all the population. Therefore, it will benefited humanity in future.
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
.... Therefore, it will benefited humanity in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23553719008 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86318315377 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421487603306 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.0859495694 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4615384615 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464106058932 0.215688989381 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210786783039 0.103423049105 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962072746533 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328686749807 0.15604864568 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06772951078 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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