The table below shows a survey on the preference of different age groups in a European country on different tv programs in 2012

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The table below shows a survey on the preference of different age groups in a European country on different tv programs in 2012.

The provided table illustrates the result of a survey conducted in a European nation regarding the preference of varied tv programs watched by various age groups in 2012. Data is measured in the percentage.

Overall, it is clear from the chart that people's preference of watching sports was almost same among the all age groups while, least proportion of cartoons was watched by the 21-25 age group.

As can be seen that people from the age group of 11-15, gave highest 29% preference to the cartoons programs followed by the sports. Moreover, approximately same proportion shared by the feature films and soap opera, 18% and 17% respectively. However, only 6% preference devoted to the news.

With regards the age group 16-20, almost similar proportion (18%) of cartoons, news and sports were watched by this group. Their largest proportion of preference (23%) was accounted for feature films. Furthermore, age group of 21-25 shared their interest toward news(23%). The respective figures for the feature films and soap opera were 20% and 19%.

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Average: 7.9 (10 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66402406548 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6440129924 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242221630467 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913538029118 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103075592929 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168756067397 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930756885907 0.0819641961636 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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