The world is rapidly progressing nowadays and so is technology. Use of mobile phones, applications and internet is ubiquitous. With a single click, you can approach any kind of medium you require. It has made life lot simpler by connecting people who live far apart, being able to access all kinds of information from internet, online shopping and enriching lives with various entertainment sources. Hence it has taken a major chunk of our lives.
On one hand, technology has simplified our lives to a great degree. We can easily browse and buy things online and have them delivered at our door step, which saves us a trip to the markets. We can upload and share pictures easily. We can apply for jobs and give online interviews from anywhere in the world. We can search information and have access to news . And to top the list, we have mobile applications which help us write messages, set alarms and make notes for us. Who had ever imagined this would happen one day ! That's the magic of technology; Our lives have become oversimplified.
On the other hand, consuming our lives greatly it also brings it's hazards. The use of technology has made us extremely lazy. With technology doing all our chores, we only need to command. It is increasing the incidence of obesity and diseases among people.
Moreover , technology has made us so preoccupied that we have forgotten what real relationships are like. Instead of driving over to a friend's house, we prefer to say hi over voice texts. We spend more time over social media than with people in real. Two siblings sitting in the same room will be glued to their mobiles, checking social media updates , not having anything to say to each other. The idea of giving check in statuses when you go out with friends makes people so paranoid that they forget what it is actually like to enjoy food and company of people. Life revolves more around the pictures you post on social media and the comments you receive. How deeply saddening it is that you may chat with people on social networks like real buddies but have nothing to say to them when meeting in person. Instead of having quality conversations with our family, we prefer playing video games and watching television shows together Apparently, social networking may have improved our communication skills and increased our friends circle, but in reality it has made us lonely and superficial.
Though we do not realize the grave damage technology is doing to us, i believe it is still in our hands to steer our own boats. Realizing the comforts and advantages it brings to us, we need to control its usage to prevent its negative influence. Calling people up and meeting them in person should always be a priority. Heart to heart conversations with family and friends should hold more value than taking pictures and posting them on social media or tagging friends in memes. Playing a video game with siblings should be replaced by going for a long walk . In a nutshell, we should look for ways to bond together and live well.
Therefore in my opinion, no matter how strong the influence of technology is, if we take proper measures we can prevent it from taking charge of our social and personal lives. To strike a balance should be the ultimate motto.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ves with various entertainment sources. Hence it has taken a major chunk of our lives...
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...e can upload and share pictures easily. We can apply for jobs and give online inte...
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... interviews from anywhere in the world. We can search information and have access ...
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...arch information and have access to news . And to top the list, we have mobile app...
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...uld be replaced by going for a long walk . In a nutshell, we should look for ways ...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...ays to bond together and live well. Therefore in my opinion, no matter how strong the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, apparently, but, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 1.00243902439 1696% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 6.8 368% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 66.0 5.60731707317 1177% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 33.7804878049 228% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2703.0 965.302439024 280% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 565.0 196.424390244 288% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78407079646 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87542086881 3.73543355544 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55634504111 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 303.0 106.607317073 284% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536283185841 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 841.5 283.868780488 296% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 1.53170731707 1045% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.114634146341 1745% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 8.94146341463 358% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.6118865085 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.46875 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65625 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 3.70975609756 404% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104040367399 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284854226305 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317710624089 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558192023918 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308998606155 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 40.7170731707 285% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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