you are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Dear Sir,
I am writing with reference to our last conversation, when you determined my first working day. Regarding to the dialogue, I should start working from the First of July. Despite my attempts about not having any disorganization, I am not able to embark from that date. As I described for you, I am involving in a national project, which is related to my major. Based on my contract, I am allowed to leave the company, whenever the project is finished. On the other hand, the construction will have been completed by end of July. Although I have done my duties, I have to stay there till the mentioned date. Furthermore, I have to clarify documents to a person, who has been employed, recently. I know you respect discipline and can consider my situation. I would appreciate, if you could permit to join in your prestigious group at the First of August.
I am looking forward to hear your positive reply.
Yours Sincerely
S
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...om that date. As I described for you, I am involving in a national project, which is related...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 795, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'joining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'permit' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: joining
...I would appreciate, if you could permit to join in your prestigious group at the First ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tigious group at the First of August. I am looking forward to hear your positiv...
^
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...First of August. I am looking forward to hear your positive reply. Yours Sincerely...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, with reference to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69696969697 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91930026712 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660606060606 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.114634146341 1745% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5525417359 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.5833333333 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.75 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182161299098 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061153880914 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440488114492 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974298842513 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974298842513 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.