60th wedding anniversary
Dear Jennifer,
I am writing to request some unpaid leave next month.
My parents' 60th wedding anniversary is on March 21st, and they are planning to celebrate this significant achievement with all their children and grandchildren. To do this, they have rented a house big enough to accommodate the whole family.
To participate in this special occasion, I would need to be away from work for four days,from Monday 19th to Thursday 23rd. My schedule for that week is relatively light, apart from two meetings with clients. Netta would be able to attend these in
my place, as she has had previous dealings with both companies and knows the relevant staff there. I have no other urgent work commitments at that time.
I would be very grateful if you could allow me this time. These few days are very important to my parents and the whole family, and it would be a way to than them for all the support they have given me.
Best wishes,
[Collected Sample]
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , from
... need to be away from work for four days,from Monday 19th to Thursday 23rd. My schedu...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73214285714 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52941174047 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696428571429 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.477222665 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0820633512825 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030321606445 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909648193351 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0439021901617 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878043803234 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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