A Canadian friend recently sent you a present by post You want to thank him her Write a letter to your friend In your letter Say how you felt when you received the present Describe what you like about it Explain how you will use the present

Hi John,

What a fabulous surprise that I have last Thursday! When the postman knocked my door "Mr.Hendam, You have a parcel from Canada!" the postman said.

I couldn't imagine that it was from you. Really, I just write to you to thank you for such an amazing gift.
Once I unwrapped it, surprisingly, I jumped with screaming. It seems to me that you still remember the kind of watch I admire. That is the one we saw together in the shopping center located in the midtown'small, isn't it?

Come on Canuck! I like its style and shape it could fit me more with casual clothing. That could be perfect in going out and mingling with my pals. I will let them take photos of me wearing that watch, send these photo for you!

I will keep in touch with you in the coming weeks about how the response of such a perfect watch in my love story!
love you man, say hi to Julia and Amanda, I will be back in 3 months, see you soon.

Best wishes,

Hindam

Votes
Average: 9.1 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hendam
...en the postman knocked my door 'Mr.Hendam, You have a parcel from Canada!' t...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...om Canada!' the postman said. I couldnt imagine that it was from you. Really, I...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 211, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ing center located in the midtownsmall, isnt it? Come on Canuck! I like its style...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Love
...such a perfect watch in my love story! love you man, say hi to Julia and Amanda, I ...
^^^^
Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ee you soon. Best wishes, Hindam
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, still, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38888888889 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45527901912 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.360824742268 554% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7983516297 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2917549526 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965893054996 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105393982332 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16251641222 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843510830745 0.0580467560999 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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