Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn’t write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Sue and Jenifer,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to say thank you for fantastic photos you send.
The photo arrived yesterday and reminded me the unforgettable time I had with you both. You were the best host I have ever seen and I really thank you. Please forgive me if I don't write you earlier, this is because I have worked flat out since I arrived home. I told you about my thesis, I understand the deadline is a week earlier than I expected.
By the way, now, I pass it away. Why don't you come and stay here for a time? I am sure we will have a great time, I can show you the fabulous lake I have told you before and we can take the extraordinary photo there. Ask me soon whenever you decide to come.
Hope you to see soon,
Elmira
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eally thank you. Please forgive me if I dont write you earlier, this is because I ha...
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Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... By the way, now, I pass it away. Why dont you come and stay here for a time? I am...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, well, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 26.3917525773 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 617.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.08609271523 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22417985105 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6658514544 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.0909090909 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7272727273 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345301900641 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144837654849 0.0766984524023 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804064723628 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186439959545 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114234405304 0.0580467560999 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.85 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.95 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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